Saturday, December 8, 2012

Aquarelle

by Ion Minulescu - 1920

In the city where it always rains three times in seven days
All the citizens on sideways,
Walk by two while holding hands,
In the city where it always rains three times in seven days,
Covered under old umbrellas
Sighing, bending,
Wet from raining,
All the citizens on sideways
Look like automated puppets taken out of the storefronts.

In the city where it always rains three times in seven days
You can only hear on sideways
Steps of those who walk by two,
Counting
In their mind
The falling
Of the raindrops from umbrellas,
From the gutters,
And from sky
With the power of a cry
Giver of a life that's latent,
Useless,
Monotone
And absent.

In the city where it always rains three times in seven days
An old man and an old woman -
Looking like two broken toys -
Walk on sideway hand in hand...

3 comments:

George Ion said...

Although this poem looks like symbolism it is not. It is less or more depending on the point of view. It is less because of the second last verse that talks about the two toys of joy or self abuse the symbolism teaches us are finally broken and that could not be a good omen for the reader who thinks of or already embraced it. It is more because of the same reason, and the poet no matter how hard they tried to teach him retained that radical piece of common sense naturally inherited from his multi-milenary ancestry.

George Ion said...

Or maybe he learned his lessons and tries to teach us 2 is not a good number for toys?

George Ion said...

Sounds like brainwashing to me...

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